After viewing our responses to the opening, there are a few things we will be looking to change.
We need to finish editing certain clips to give a consistant effect where needed such as our CCTV.
Also we will look to decrease the volume of diagetic sound, thus making our music more over-powering.
We will try to fit the music more to the visuals. This will make the scene more easy to follow and help to build suspense effectively. Such as dropping the beats of the music and editing the clips to fit it.
We will also make credits for our video and add a title.